Have you finished your novel and want an experienced reader to tell you what is working — and what isn't?

I offer detailed developmental manuscript assessments for novelists who want constructive, independent feedback before embarking on another draft or submitting their work.

I read the complete manuscript and provide a detailed assessment of its structure, characterisation, voice, pacing, point of view and overall coherence, together with practical recommendations for revision.

Standalone Manuscript Assessment

A detailed independent assessment of your manuscript, without ongoing mentoring.

Ideal if you've completed a novel and want an experienced reader to give you an honest, constructive assessment before deciding what to do next.

• Full manuscript read

• Detailed written editorial assessment

• Discussion of structure, character, voice, pacing, point of view and overall coherence

• Identification of the manuscript's principal strengths and weaknesses

• Practical recommendations for revision and next steps

From £750

The fee depends on manuscript length and complexity. This service is developmental rather than line editing or proofreading.